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The Lady With the Lamp and the Angel of the Battlefield

The Lady With the Lamp and the Angel of the Battlefield

‘Florence Nightingale’ and ‘Clara and Davie’



Florence Nightingale and Clara Barton, two great heroines of 19th-century nursing, were born a year apart but in utterly different circumstances. Nightingale was born in the spring of 1820 to a wealthy British family living in Italy. They returned to England shortly after, entertaining the beau monde of the day at Embley Park, their estate near London. Barton, born on Christmas Day in 1821, was the youngest of five children in a farming family in North Oxford, Mass. Her mother and sister Dolly seem to have suffered from mental illness; Clara was raised, in large part, by her brother Davie. She became a teacher at the age of 15.
In “Florence Nightingale,” Demi, the author and illustrator of many biographical picture books (including “Joan of Arc," “Marco Polo” and “Alexander the Great”), chooses to tell Florence’s story from her birth to her death at the age of 90. Her narrative works hard to cover so much ground — following Nightingale from Italy to England to Germany, Egypt, Turkey and Crimea. Demi’s language is clear, and the story will be comprehensible to older children, who may find the piety, compassion, enterprise and perseverance of "the Lady with the Lamp” inspiring. But the long description of Nightingale’s life feels a little unadorned and textureless, without a single quotation to give readers a sense of her voice, which must have been an educated and persuasive one, given the extent of what she accomplished (much of it by letter).
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Credit From "Clara and Davie"
Fortunately, Demi’s illustrations bring great charm to each page, and create a sense of cultural and historical context. She uses a thin black outline for her human figures (whether wounded or healthy, they all resemble Victorian china dolls, with pretty, long-lashed eyes and ruddy cheeks) and then colors the pictures brightly, in some places seeming to use collage for the patterned textiles of Florence’s dresses and for the rich interiors of her family’s houses. She draws faces with great skill: In one scene, the loving look Florence and a young patient — little more than a toddler — exchange as she carries him in her arms conveys something important about the rewards she must have found in nursing, as do the sometimes agonized but mostly adoring expressions of the soldiers she tends as they lie in long rows in cold, dirty military hospitals.
In “Clara and Davie,” Patricia Polacco takes a very different approach, telling only the story of Barton’s Massachusetts childhood and leaving her success as founder and longtime leader of the American Red Cross to an author’s note at the end of the book, where children old enough to be interested can read further. An artful storyteller, Polacco invents lifelike details and vernacular dialogue to bring interest to this tale of the little girl who became “the Angel of the Battlefield.”
When Davie first holds baby Clara, he exclaims: “That’s some grip. I bet she’ll be breakin’ horses for Pa before we know it!” Later, as Barton grows, she is teased because of her lisp, and returns home from school in tears. (Like Amy March in “Little Women,” Clara is allowed to learn at home from then on.) She studies medical books and acts as a veterinarian to the family’s farm animals. When Davie breaks both his legs falling from the barn’s roof beam, she attends him, proud when a doctor compliments her, saying, “Well, girly, you did exactly what I would have done.”
Readers may prefer Polacco’s narrative to her trademark illustrations. She uses pencil very heavily and colors her pages with lots of browns and grays, to dreary effect. Though the illustrations showing Clara and Davie at play outside are more cheerful, Polacco’s characters’ faces often look overly dramatic — the happy ones, slightly manic; the sad ones at the point of total despair. There’s expression in these drawings, to be sure, but they may leave some children thinking wistfully of Garth Williams’s pictures for Laura Ingalls Wilder’s “Little House” books, which somehow convey emotion and setting more attractively — even without any color at all.
Picture-book biographies are tricky to get right. Too much information, and the content will begin to exceed the range of young readers. How can a child with almost no knowledge of European geography or history make anything of references to the Battle of Balaclava (now strangely in the news again)? The facts they will understand are mostly emotional ones: small acts of kindness or bravery that somehow hint at a character’s potential to eventually do great things. Polacco is more successful at this, but Demi’s book offers visual pleasures that children may respond to more enthusiastically.

FLORENCE NIGHTINGALE

Written and illustrated by Demi
40 pp. Henry Holt & Company. $17.99. (Picture book; ages 6 to 10)

CLARA AND DAVIE

Written and illustrated by Patricia Polacco
40 pp. Scholastic Press. $17.99. (Picture book; ages 5 to 8)